Wednesday, February 21, 2007

The Win

An eighth grader scored the winning goal for her soccer team in the summer of 2000 at a tournament in Biloxi,MS.

The game went into overtime. The score was tied. The next shot would have won the game. Merri Shaffer stepped up and led her team to victory! The final score was 3-2.

It was a very happy moment for Shaffer: "It was so exhilarating! They lifted me on to their shoulders and carried me away!"

This was Shaffer's first time ever playing soccer. Her team was a recreational league. She received a trophy for her accomplishment.

Merri Shaffer, 19, is currently a sophomore at The University of Tennessee majoring in journalism and electronic media. She no longer plays soccer, but she 'will always remember that winning goal.'

Questions
1.Where did this take place? Name of field?
2.How did you win?
3.How did you feel after you won?
4.What team did you play against?
5.How long have you played?
6.Do you still play? If so, who for?
7.When did this take place?
8.What was the final score?
9.Did you receive any kind of honor/ medal/ trophy...?
10.Name of your team?
11.How old are you/ where are you from/ what's your major?

1 comment:

sbowman5 said...

*The second paragraph uses the several short sentences in a row/ also use "The" to begin most of the sentences in that paragraph.
*A space needs to be addedbetween the location and state (appreviation?)
*The last quote should have quotation marks, b/c it is not a quote within a quote.